If you were a medical student during the time of the pandemic, do you think you would be better or w
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Many people in various professions get disbenefit. Medical students also lost their chance to fully experience the hospital during the time of the pandemic. Especially medical students in 3th or 4th grade who get clinical training got disadvantage, because hospitals started to minimalize the number of people in the hospital since the pandemic started. Hospitals limit the number of carer to one and manage all the people staying in the hospital. Thus the practical time for students to stay in the hospital is shortened and the chances for them to meet the patients are reduced. They cannot participate in the roundings and outpatient clinics. Many seminars are canceled due to COVID-19, thus they also lose chance to participate in the medical seminars. Therefore, I would be worse in my profession, if I were a medical student during the pandemic.
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Hello [이름]!
I agree with all that you have said. So many professions have been disadvantaged not only in the medial field. In fact, if we think about it, all professions are affected this time. As soon as the pandemic is over, we can go back slowly to the correct ways and practices, most specially in medicine where practice and experience are a must.
Thank you for sending me this. I think you have done it and have forgotten to send. It is very well-made!
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-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Many people in various professions get discredit.
Especially medical students in 3th or 4th grade who get clinical training got disadvantage, because hospitals started to minimalize the number of people in the hospital since the pandemic started.
>> Especially for medical students in the 3th or 4th grade who get clinical training were disadvantaged, because hospitals started to minimalize the number of people in the hospital since the pandemic started.
Hospitals limit the number of carer to one and manage all the people staying in the hospital. Thus the practical time for students to stay in the hospital is shortened and the chances for them to meet the patients are reduced.
>> Correct!
They cannot participate in the roundings and outpatient clinics. Many seminars are canceled due to COVID-19, thus they also lose chance to participate in the medical seminars.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I would be worse in my profession, if I were a medical student during the pandemic.
>> Correct!
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