If you were a mode of transportation, what would you be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were a mode of transportation, I would like to be a subway. It is because I want to experience a life in underground. I think it might be fun and a little bit scary, because of the dark, but still it will be good. Staying underground will not have any traffic jam and goes faster than most of the other transportation. I will also get to meet lots of different people in subway and enjoy going to places. Therefore, I would like to be a subway for fun!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer which is really interesting.
We don\'t have any subway here in my country so I think being a subway is really fun too! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
It is because I want to experience a life in underground.
>> It is because I want to experience the life in the underground.
I think it might be fun and a little bit scary, because of the dark, but still it will be good.
>> CORRECT.
Staying underground will not have any traffic jam and goes faster than most of the other transportation.
>> There will be no traffic jams underground and it also goes faster than most of the other mode of transportation.
I will also get to meet lots of different people in subway and enjoy going to places.
>> I will also get to meet lots of different people in the subway and enjoy going to places.
Therefore, I would like to be a subway for fun!
>> CORRECT.
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