If you were a musical instrument, what would you be and why?
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If I was a musical instrument, I would be an electronic guitar. It sounds unique, like machine. Also, it can make a lot of sounds. So I would be an electronic guitar.
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If I was a musical instrument, I would be an electronic guitar.
>> If I were a musical instrument, I would be an electronic guitar.
It sounds unique, like machine.
>> It sounds unique, like a machine.
>> OR: It sounds unique and the sound reminds of a machine.
Also, it can make a lot of sounds. So I would be an electronic guitar.
>> correct
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