If you were a policymaker, how would you address the growing student debt and youth unemployment cri
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I\'d take separate approaches to address each issue.
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To reduce youth unemployment, I\'d implement policies that help companies hire more graduates.
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One major reform would be to create a more flexible labor environment, similar to what exists in America.
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Rigid Korean labor laws often make companies hesitant to hire new employees due to the difficulty of dismissal.
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While this may slightly reduce job security, it would increase overall job opportunities by encouraging more hiring and mobility in the labor market.
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As for growing student debt, we should stop suppressing tuition fee increases.
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Many high-quality faculty members are leaving Korea in search of better pay and working conditions abroad.
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To maintain educational quality, universities must be allowed to raise tuition for enough budget.
>> To maintain educational quality, universities must be allowed to raise tuition to raise enough budget.
Also, students should be encouraged to take more responsibility for funding their education.
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They need to be encouraged to work their way through college in addition to government\'s policy for them.
>> They need to be encouraged to work their way through college in addition to the government\'s policy for them.
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