If you were a precious stone (example: ruby, diamond, jade), what would you be and why?
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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Task] If you were a precious stone (example: ruby, diamond, jade), what would you be and why? Please answer in no more than five (5) sentences.
If I become a precious stone, I want to be a diamond because diamond is my favorite precious stone.
Why do I like diamond?
I love clearness of the diamond.
Diamond shine, when get sunlight. It is very fantastic.
I hope to have diamond necklace someday.
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Hello, Daisy! (^__^)
I really appreciate you taking the time to complete your homework. I thoroughly read it.
If I were a precious stone, I would choose to be a topaz, my birthstone. Health, love, and astrology are among topics covered in topaz symbolism and legend. Topaz has a long history of being viewed as a symbol of riches.
I will see you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
If I become a precious stone, I want to be a diamond because diamond is my favorite precious stone.
>>> If I were a precious stone, I would want to be a diamond because that is my favorite precious stone.
Why do I like diamond?
I love clearness of the diamond.
Why do I like diamond?
I love clearness of the diamond.
>>> Why do I like diamonds?
I love the clarity of diamonds.
Diamond shine, when get sunlight. It is very fantastic.>>> Diamonds shine when they get sunlight. It is very fantastic.
>>> OR: When exposed to sunlight, diamonds glow. It is just amazing.
I hope to have diamond necklace someday.
I hope to have diamond necklace someday.
>>> I hope to have a diamond necklace someday.
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