If you were a song, what song would you be and why?

2024-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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It is an interesting metaphor. I f I were a song, I think I would be a hymn. I spend a lot of time doing God\'s work. It seems like a mono, but it is very touching. It might not be very fun, but it has a strong sense of life. I would like to have a life that moves forward. Although the song is not harmonious, it feels like a solo.

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Hi, MK!
It\'s very nice that even when it comes to the song you can compare yourself to, you still chose a song related to faith. I agree, hymns might sometimes sound plain, but they give peace and a sense of comfort.
- T. Caitlyn
It is an interesting metaphor. 
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If I were a song, I think I would be a hymn.
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I spend a lot of time doing God\'s work.
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It seems like a mono, but it is very touching.
>> It may seem like a monotone, but it is very touching. 
It might not be very fun, but it has a strong sense of life.
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I would like to have a life that moves forward.
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Although the song is not harmonious, it feels like a solo.
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