If you were a TV character, who would you be?
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Hello Chloe! Thanks for a very nice answer. Always continue learning and practicing. Have a nice day!
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If I were a TV character, I want to be a one member of Pocket Monster.
>> If I were a TV character, I want to be one of the members of Pocket Monster.
In the series of Pocket Monster, most people have their Pokemons.
>> In the series Pocket Monster, most of the people have their Pokemons.
When they have some problems, they overcome the situations with their Pokemons.
>> Whenever they have some problems they overcome these with their Pokemons.
People can fly the sky by riding flying type of Pokemons, or swim in the ocean with the water type of them.
>> People can fly in the sky by riding a flying type of Pokemons, or swim in the ocean with the water type Pokemons.
They spend time together in eating, sleeping, and every time.
>> They spend their time by eating and sleeping together every time.
If I had Pokemons like them, I can get some helps through them.
>> If I had Pokemons like them, I can ask some help from them.
By communicating with them, I [이름]\'t be lonely.
>> Correct.
This is why I want to be a member of Pocket Monster.
>> Correct.
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