If you were a very rich person, Where would you go for your next holiday?

2022-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I was a very rich person, I will make the holiday for me. There\'s nothing money can\'t do, And I want to go around Europe like U.K, France, Germany, Italy and etc. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

What should people do during the holiday? hahaha. I\'m curious. By the way, those are great plans!

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If I was a very rich person, I will make the holiday for me.

>>If I was a very rich person, I will make a holiday for myself.

There\'s nothing money can\'t do,

>> There\'s nothing money can\'t do.

And I want to go around Europe like U.K, France, Germany, Italy and etc. :)

>>CORRECT

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