If you were an editor, what would you write about?
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If I am an editor, I will write about the recent news. Today, most of the news is interesting and shocking. So If I be the editor, I will write about the news.
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If I am an editor, I will write about the recent news.
>> If I were an editor, I would write about current event.
Today, most of the news is interesting and shocking.
>> correct
>> or: We usually hear about interesting and shocking news nowadays.
So If I be the editor, I will write about the news.
>> So if I were an editor, I would write about such news.
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