If you were an object, what would you be? Why?

2020-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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If I am an object, I want to be a desk. Because desk contains a lot of passion of students. Also, many students take most of the time in the desk. So I want to be a desk.

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Jean~~
If I am an object, I want to be a desk. Because desk contains a lot of passion of students.
>> If I were an object, I would want to be a desk because it contains a lot of passion of students. 

 Also, many students take most of the time in the desk. So I want to be a desk.
>>  Also, many learners spend most of their time at their desks. So I want to be a desk.

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