If you were asked to choose one place in your city where you wouldn´t take a tourist, which one woul
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It is difficult to pinpoint any particular places not to recommend tourists to visit.
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However, in general, I personally do not like to visit modern cities of foreign countries because they are almost similar.
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I cannot tell the differences of the modernized cities regardless of where they are.
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So, I would rather recommend the countryside or rural areas to visit than big cities.
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Traveling to small towns or outlying areas can give us an opportunity to see and feel the real life and culture of the local people of the country.
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Unlike certain countries, Korea doesn’t have slum districts.
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>> OR: Korea doesn\'t have slum areas unlike in certain countries.
Korea has made a lot of effort to rebuild slum areas so that almost all the poor districts have been transformed to one of the typical urban cities, although the rebuilding project has entailed many side effects such as pushing the original residents out of the town and losing the original atmosphere of the old town.
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>> OR:Korea has made a lot of effort to rebuild slum areas so that almost all the poor districts have been transformed to one of the typical urban cities. Although, rebuilding project has entailed many side effects such as pushing the original residents out of the town and losing the original atmosphere of the old town.
Anyway regardless of where to go, even thinking about traveling makes us feel excited.
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