If you were given a chance to move to another country, what country would you choose and why?
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Hi again my dear. :)
Wow, you made two homework tonight. :) I am just curious, have you ever been to Australia before? And that place is a good choice because it is a rich country with many tourists spots and beautiful places. Oh maybe tomorrow I will ask you what kind of beef dish do you like. :)
And again, proper nouns should always be capitalized when you are making a sentence. Even if you are rushing, you should always check that proper nouns are written correctly in your sentences.
Also, you should use the preposition \"to\" in your sentence because this preposition is used to specify places just like to Australia.
Have a great night and take care on your way to school tomorrow. ^^
T. Tanya ^_^
I want to move on austrailia because i can see many animals and i can eat beef
a lot in there
>> I want to move to Australia because I can see different kinds of animals there. And I can also eat a lot of beef there.
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