If you were given a chance to work abroad, where would you want to work and why?

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1. I think you don\'t know the company \'Comfort Zone\'.

>>I think you don\'t know about the company called \"Comfort Zone\".

2. Comfort Zone is the cosmetics brand of Davines Group in Italy.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: It is a cosmetics brand by Davines group from Italy.
3. At the same time, they\'re supplier who provide products to us.

>>At the same time, they are a supplier who provides products to us.

4. The reason why I want to work there is employer\'s welfare is better than my company\'s one. and their company philosophy is respectable.

>>The reason why I want to work there is because the employee welfare system is better than my company\'s, and they philosophy is respectable.

5. They seek and emphasis on \'Sustainability of beauty\', \'Science based Conscious formula\' and \'re-usable packaging\' by using eco-friendly materials.

>>They seek and emphasize on the \"sustainability of beauty\", \"science-based conscious formula\", and \"reusable packaging\" using eco-friendly materials.

6. The people in the company always look like happy.

>>The people in the company always look happy.

7. I can feel that when I communicate with them by email or skype.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: That\'s what comes across to me when I communicate with them by email or Skype.

8. They have a garden with large size called \'Davines Village\' where the beautiful trees and flowers are growing, so sometimes they invite other people from abroad then have a party twice a year.

>>They have a large garden called \"Davines Village\" where the beautiful trees and flowers are growing, so sometimes they invite other people from abroad then have a party twice a year.
9. I want to go there too but haven\'t got the chance yet.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I haven\'t gone there yet but I would love to go.

10. Due to my resign in this company, I\'ll lost this opportunity. ㅠㅠ I\'m sad.ㅠㅠ

>>Due to my resignation from this company, I\'ll lose this opportunity so I feel sad.