If you were given an opportunity to be born again, in which country would you like to be born?
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Hi Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday. ^^
I am so happy to hear that you\'ve been to twenty countries.
I am envious. Hihihi.
I hope that I can also travel abroad and Korea is on top of my list. ^^
I really want to see the beautiful sceneries there.
You are right. It is really good to live in Canada.
I guess there are a lot of opportunities there.
I hope you can visit my country someday.
Have a wonderful day.
Teacher Nina
I have never lived in foreign countries for a long time although I have traveled to as many as almost 20 countries mostly on business.
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>> OR: I have never lived in foreign countries for a long time, although I have traveled to as many as almost 20 countries mostly on business.
When I went foreign countries, I used to stay for a short period time like a week.
>> When I went to foreign countries, I used to stay for a short period of time like a week.
Living permanently and staying short could make a lot of difference.
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Some countries like Thailand, New Zealand, Paraguay, middle east countries or even African countries could be wonderful to travel and stay for a few days because their landscapes and sceneries are quite different from your country and they look exotic.
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You would be overwhelmed by the different atmosphere they create.
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However, living in a country permanently is a completely different story.
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You have to take all the factors into account such as climate, the level of economic development, educational system, safety, welfare system, etc.
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Considering all of them, I think that Canada is on the top of my list.
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People in Canada are nice and well educated.
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Their social safety net is well designed and working well.
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