If you were going to be a teacher, where would you like to teach?

2022-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Erin

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If I going to be a teacher, I will teach in student\'s house like homeschool. Because I think I can\'t bear many students and I don\'t like noisy place so I want to teach in student\'s house. And I want to teach Korean. Because I liked to learn about Korean and I am good at studying Korean.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Daisy!
Wow! I think that is a good idea. I know you will be a good private tutor. ^_^
~T.Erin

If I going to be a teacher,
>>If I\'m going to be a teacher,
 I will teach in student\'s house like homeschool.
>>I will teach in student\'s houses like homeschool.
 Because I think I can\'t bear many students
>>CORRECT
 and I don\'t like noisy place
>>I don\'t like noisy places
 so I want to teach in student\'s house.
>>So I want to teach in students\' houses.
 And I want to teach Korean.
>>CORRECT
 Because I liked to learn about Korean and I am good at studying Korean.
>>Because I like learning about Korean and I am good at it.

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