If you were going to implement an ordinance, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will implement an ordinance for people who have disabilities. I heard that our country\'s facility is poor for disabilities. For example, I heard that some braille are misplaced and the yellow blocks are not enough. Also, there are not enough busses for people on wheel chairs. I want to change this by implementing ordinance about setting enough yellow blocks near big streets, stations, schools and national offices. Newly made busses should be prepared to take people on wheel chairs. I also want to make drunken driver penalty fee higher.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
In your country, are you allowed to raise your concerns? You have a very good plan if you were given a chance to implement an ordinance. I hope that your government will be able to see these concerns. Thank you for this and always find happiness in what you do.
T. Aki~
I will implement an ordinance for people who have disabilities.
>> CORRECT!
I heard that our country\'s facility is poor for disabilities.
>> I heard that our country\'s facility is poor for disabilities.
For example, I heard that some braille are misplaced and the yellow blocks are not enough.
>> For example, I heard that some braille is misplaced and the yellow blocks are not enough.
Also, there are not enough busses for people on wheel chairs.
>> Also, there are not enough busses for people in wheelchairs.
I want to change this by implementing ordinance about setting enough yellow blocks near big streets, stations, schools and national offices.
>> I want to change this by implementing an ordinance about setting enough yellow tiles near big streets, stations, schools, and national offices.
Newly made busses should be prepared to take people on wheel chairs.
>> Newly made busses should be prepared to take people on wheel chairs.
I also want to make drunken driver penalty fee higher.
>> I also want to make the drunken driver penalty fee higher.
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