If you were invited to a fancy dinner with the president or a celebrity, what would you do to prepar
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If I have a chance to meet with Girls\' Generation and getting a fancy dinner, I gotta prepare for many things like a suit, a humor, getting a hair cut and trying to look neat. The group was such famous, when I was a student at middle school. Also, my favorite girl is Yoon-A. You know what? But now, it\'s meaningless that I like celebrity. I\'m busy living. :)
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Hi Elic:)
If I have a chance to meet with Girls\' Generation and getting a fancy dinner, I gotta prepare for many things like a suit, a humor, getting a hair cut and trying to look neat.
>> If I have a chance to meet the Girls\' Generation and have a fancy dinner, I ahve toprepare for many things like a suit, a humor, getting a hair cut and try to look neat.
The group was such famous, when I was a student at middle school.
>> This group is very famous when I was still a middle school student.
Also, my favorite girl is Yoon-A.
>> CORRECT
You know what? But now, it\'s meaningless that I like celebrity. I\'m busy living. :)
>> You know what? Now, it\'s meaningless that I like celebrity. I\'m busy living. :)
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