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2019-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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First of all, I would like to buy a fancy dress. But it should not be tight because I want to eat a lot of nice dishes. :-) And I don’t want to have a diet before I wear it. So I need a nice, pleasant but slightly fancy dress. In that particularly important dinner, I would like to get makeup and hair styling in a beauty salon. Cool and gorgeous shoes and bags should be needed as well. I can not buy all the things at the same time, so maybe I would borrow it from somebody.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


First of all, I would like to buy a fancy dress.

>>> correct


But it should not be tight because I want to eat a lot of nice dishes. :-)

>>> But it shouldn\'t be tight because I want to eat a lot of good dishes.


And I don’t want to have a diet before I wear it.

>>> And I don\'t want to go on a diet before I wear that dress.


So I need a nice, pleasant but slightly fancy dress.

>>> correct


In that particularly important dinner, I would like to get makeup and hair styling in a beauty salon.

>>> correct


Cool and gorgeous shoes and bags should be needed as well.

>>> correct


I can not buy all the things at the same time, so maybe I would borrow it from somebody.

>>> correct

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