If you were invited to a fancy dinner with the president or a celebrity, what would you do to prepar

2019-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 May

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If I were invited to a dinner with a celebrity, I would buy luxury clothes and get hair in the famous hair shop which celebrities usually visit to. It would be honor for me having a dinner with the president or a celebrity. I haven\'t had a chance to talk with them since I was born. They are like a people who are not living in the earth, I thought they were just ones that we could see on TV. I know that they are human like us too. However, I am not sure what can I say to them and I don\'t know if I can have a conversation with them like when I met my close friends. Actually, I have a fear of talking in public. I guess I can\'t say anything when I meet celebrity. But I feel excited to meet them. I hope I have a chance to have a meal with famous people someday.

강사 첨삭

I think anyone would feel very excited to have a meal with them, so do I.

Happy Wednesday [이름]! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

If I were invited to a dinner with a celebrity, I would buy luxury clothes and get hair in the famous hair shop which celebrities usually visit to.

>> If I were invited to a dinner with a celebrity, I would buy luxury clothes and get my hair done in the famous hair shop which celebrities usually visit to.

It would be honor for me having a dinner with the president or a celebrity.

>> It would be an honor for me to have a dinner with the president or a celebrity.

I haven\'t had a chance to talk with them since I was born. 

>> CORRECT
 They are like a people who are not living in the earth,

>> They are like people who do not live on earth.

I thought they were just ones that we could see on TV. 
 I know that they are human like us too.

>> CORRECT

However, I am not sure what can I say to them and I don\'t know if I can have a conversation with them like when I met my close friends.

>> However, I am not sure what I can say to them and I don\'t know if I can have a conversation with them like how I meet my close friends.

Actually, I have a fear of talking in public.

>> CORRECT

I guess I can\'t say anything when I meet celebrity.

>> I guess I can\'t say anything when I meet a celebrity.
 But I feel excited to meet them. 

I hope I have a chance to have a meal with famous people someday.

>> CORRECT

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