If you were on a deserted island, what would you bring and why?
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If you were on a deserted island, what would you bring and why?
I bring the water,food,close,home,and shampoo because waht I me ov my live.
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If you were on a deserted island, what would you bring and why?
>> I would bring food, water, clothes, and toiletries because they are essentials.
I bring the water,food,close,home,and shampoo because waht I me ov my live.
>> I will bring water, food, clothes, shelter, and toiletries because they are a necessity.
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