If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?

2021-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think the most important purpose of opening party is happiness. Yeah, it can be more fun if we use a lot of money for the party. But as we can feel big happiness in small things, the party don\'t have to be very big. So if I am planning a party with very small budget, I will buy a few food. And I will invite my friends in my party.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

That sounds like a great party! :) Thanks for sharing.

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I think the most important purpose of opening party is happiness.

> I think the most important thing about opening a party is happiness.

Yeah, it can be more fun if we use a lot of money for the party.

>> CORRECT

But as we can feel big happiness in small things, the party don\'t have to be very big.

>> But we can still feel happiness with the smallest things and parties don\'t have to be very big.

So if I am planning a party with very small budget, I will buy a few food.

>> So if I am planning a party with very small budget, I will buy some food and invite some of my friends over.

And I will invite my friends in my party.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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