If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?

2021-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'ll buy the behind leg of pig. this part is the cheapest of meat. the steamed behind leg of pig is so tasty. I also buy soju and some snack. because It\'s only 1dollar per 1 bottle. I never decorate my house. because It\'s extravagance.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

That sounds like a great party. :) Thanks for sharing.

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I\'ll buy the behind leg of pig.

>> CORRECT

this part is the cheapest of meat.

>> This part is the cheapest meat of a pig.

the steamed behind leg of pig is so tasty.

>> Steaming it can be very tasty.

I also buy soju and some snack. because It\'s only 1dollar per 1 bottle.

>> I will also buys some soju and snacks because it only costs a dollar per bottle.

I never decorate my house. because It\'s extravagance

>> I will not decorate my house because it\'s too extravagant.

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