If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?

2021-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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if I have a little bit money, I will plan so many buy delicious food. place is outside or inside all it’s okay. and if I together with good people, only just eat delicious food and talk is funny. so I will buy good cooker or I will buy ingredients to cook delicious food.

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if I have a little bit money, I will plan so many buy delicious food. place is outside or inside all it’s okay.
>> If I have money, I will buy many delicious food. The party can be both inside and out.

and if I together with good people, only just eat delicious food and talk is funny.
>> I will invite over good people to talk and eat delicious food with them.

so I will buy good cooker or I will buy ingredients to cook delicious food.
>> So I will buy good ingredients to cook delicious food.

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