If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?
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To make a party great, I will ask my family to invite my friends to my house because I don\'t have much money. And then I will decorate my house like a house in the movie. Third, I will make different kinds of dishes like pasta and cookies. Fourth, I will make online invitation card with an application which make it. Lastly, I will play happily in my house. If this is real, I will enjoy my party with dress, pink light and juice like a party in the movie.
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Hi Kimberly!
That sounds like a great party.
To make a party great, I will ask my family to invite my friends to my house because I don\'t have much money.
>> CORRECT
And then I will decorate my house like a house in the movie.
>>And then I will decorate my house like the houses in movies.
Third, I will make different kinds of dishes like pasta and cookies.
>> CORRECT
Fourth, I will make online invitation card with an application which make it.
>> Fourth, I will make online invitation cards using an app.
Lastly, I will play happily in my house.
>> Lastly, I will play happily in my house.
If this is real, I will enjoy my party with dress, pink light and juice like a party in the movie.
>>If this is real, I will wear dress and prepare light pink juice just like in the movies.
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