If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?
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I\'m going to make food that I can make, and then I have to buy alcohol with a small budget like soju and bear. If I don\'t have enough a budget, I can pay with credit card. :)
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Hi Elic!
That sounds like a great party with friends.
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>> I\'m going to make food that I can make and buy alcoholic beverages with a small budget, like soju and bear.
If I don\'t have enough a budget, I can pay with credit card. :)
>>CORRECT
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