If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?
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First of all, I will go to the Korean traditional street market. This is because I think ordering food at a restaurant or buying food ingredients at a large mart such as Homeplus, and Costco requires a much higher budget. After purchasing all the food ingredients, I will look at the traditional Korean food recipes and make various foods such as K-barbecue or Seaweed soup. Also, since it\'s a party, I\'ll need a lot of party supplies, but I think I\'ll simply decorate the party with cheap balloons and plants grown at home.
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Hi Jessica!
That sounds like a great party. Each penny is very well spent. We really don\'t need a lot of money to throw an awesome party. You just need good people to be with you. :)
First of all, I will go to the Korean traditional street market.
>> First of all, I will go to a Korean traditional street market.
This is because I think ordering food at a restaurant or buying food ingredients at a large mart such as Homeplus, and Costco requires a much higher budget.
>> This is because ordering food at a restaurant or buying food in food ingredients at a large mart such as HomePlus, and Costco requires a much higher budget.
After purchasing all the food ingredients, I will look at the traditional Korean food recipes and make various foods such as K-barbecue or Seaweed soup.
>> After purchasing all the food ingredients, I will look at the traditional Korean food recipes and make various dishes such as \"Samgyeopsal\" Or \"Miyeok Guk\".
Also, since it\'s a party, I\'ll need a lot of party supplies, but I think I\'ll simply decorate the party with cheap balloons and plants grown at home.
>> Also, since it\'s a party, I\'ll need a lot of party supplies. Although, I think that I will just decorate the party simply with cheap balloons and plants grown at home.
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