If you were stranded on an island and you could only bring 3 things, what would you bring? Why?
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I want to bring water, book, and thick clothes. Because water is very important our body and if there are only sea, I can’t drink water. Book will be fun during I strand on an island. Lastly clothes is important too. If temperature difference is heavy, I have to have various clothes
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You are so smart, [이름]! ~~
Thank you so much for answering.
That\'s true, if you drink water from the ocean, you will just get dehydrated because it is so salty!
I am amazed by your reasoning skills. ^^
Keep up the good work, sweetie!
~t. Ally
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I want to bring water, book, and thick clothes. Because water is very important our body and if there are only sea, I can’t drink water. Book will be fun during I strand on an island. Lastly clothes is important too. If temperature difference is heavy, I have to have various clothes.
>> I want to bring water, a book, and some thick clothes. Because water is very important for our body and if there is only seawater, I can’t drink it. A book will be fun to read while I\'m stranded on an island. Lastly clothes are important too. If the temperature difference is big, I have to have various clothes.
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