If you were stranded on deserted island ?

2014-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I will write this 'Hi, my name is Ji [이름]. I am [Name]. I have an 10million dollar. If you catch me, I will give you a half my property. How can you find me? I give you some hint. Here is very quiet and uninhabited place. This place is not radio, light, village. Where am i? Could you find me? Cheer up ! You can make this one. ^_^ ' Why i did write this one? Because many people feel interested in compensation. They feels more fun. Thank you, teacher Becca ! ps.This homework is very hard. kkkkkk

강사 첨삭

Hey Ashley!   Thanks for sending in this one. I was expecting that you will ask for help when you get stranded in an island. But you made a contest instead! kkkk That\'s very clever ^^ See you in class!   ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections:   I will write this \'Hi, my name is Ji [이름]. I am [Name]. >> I will write a sign saying \"Hi! My name is [Name] [이름]. I am [Name].\"I have an 10million dollar. >> I have 10 million dollars. If you catch me, I will give you a half my property. >> If you can find me, I will give you half of my property. >> OR: If you can find me, you are entitled half of my property.How can you find me? I give you some hint. >> I will give you a hint on how you can find me. Here is very quiet and uninhabited place. >> I am in a very quiet and uninhabited place. This place is not radio, light, village. >> There aren\'t any radios, lights, or villages in this palce. Where am i? Could you find me? Cheer up ! >> Where am I? Can you find me? Cheer up!You can make this one. ^_^ \' >> You can finish this one.Why i did write this one? >> Why did I write this in the first place?Because many people feel interested in compensation. They feels more fun.>> Because many people are interested in compensation. They think it\'s more fun.Thank you, teacher Becca !>> correct :)ps.This homework is very hard. kkkkkk >> correct :) >> OR: I find this homework very hard. kkkk

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