If you were stranded on deserted island ?
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I will write this 'Hi, my name is Ji [이름]. I am [Name].
I have an 10million dollar.
If you catch me, I will give you a half my property.
How can you find me? I give you some hint.
Here is very quiet and uninhabited place.
This place is not radio, light, village.
Where am i? Could you find me? Cheer up !
You can make this one. ^_^ '
Why i did write this one?
Because many people feel interested in compensation. They feels more fun.
Thank you, teacher Becca !
ps.This homework is very hard. kkkkkk
강사 첨삭
Hey Ashley!
Thanks for sending in this one.
I was expecting that you will ask for help when you get stranded in an island.
But you made a contest instead! kkkk
That\'s very clever ^^
See you in class!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
I will write this \'Hi, my name is Ji [이름]. I am [Name].
>> I will write a sign saying \"Hi! My name is [Name] [이름]. I am [Name].\"I have an 10million dollar.
>> I have 10 million dollars. If you catch me, I will give you a half my property.
>> If you can find me, I will give you half of my property.
>> OR: If you can find me, you are entitled half of my property.How can you find me? I give you some hint.
>> I will give you a hint on how you can find me. Here is very quiet and uninhabited place.
>> I am in a very quiet and uninhabited place.
This place is not radio, light, village.
>> There aren\'t any radios, lights, or villages in this palce. Where am i? Could you find me? Cheer up !
>> Where am I? Can you find me? Cheer up!You can make this one. ^_^ \'
>> You can finish this one.Why i did write this one?
>> Why did I write this in the first place?Because many people feel interested in compensation. They feels more fun.>> Because many people are interested in compensation. They think it\'s more fun.Thank you, teacher Becca !>> correct :)ps.This homework is very hard. kkkkkk
>> correct :)
>> OR: I find this homework very hard. kkkk
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