If you were the boss of the company, what would you change?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were the boss of our company, I would change the time to leave our office on Fridays at 4 pm which is 2 hours earlier than usual.
Every Friday the traffic jam is really serious so it takes way more time to go to home.
If we went to home 2 hours early, we could spend more time with our family and rest well through the weekend.
It could boost worker\\\'s loyalty to the company and also raise working efficiency.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Happy Tuesday! Thank you for doing your homework in advance, I really appreciate it. I am surprised you did not mention anything about the increase in salary ^_^ Anyway, maybe we will talk about it in one of our classes. I look forward to talking to you tomorrow. ~ teacher Jane
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Every Friday the traffic jam is really serious so it takes way more time to go to home.
>>> Every Friday the traffic jam is really serious so it takes way more time to go home.
If we went to home 2 hours early, we could spend more time with our family and rest well through the weekend.
>>> If we went home 2 hours early, we could spend more time with our family and rest well through the weekend.
It could boost worker\\\'s loyalty to the company and also raise working efficiency.
>>> It could boost worker\'s loyalty to the company and also raise working efficiency.
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