If you were the president of Korea , what is the first thing you would do?
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I will try to make a war plan together with the US to conquer North Korea.
And then, I will execute that plan and make Jung-eun Kim perish.
I wanna use OPIC MASTER as our textbook since I am gonna take that exam after some time. :)
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I will try to make a war plan together with the US to conquer North Korea.
>> CORRECT
And then, I will execute that plan and make Jung-eun Kim perish.
>>Then, I will execute that plan and make Jung-eun Kim perish.
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