If you were to be turned into an animal, what animal would you be and why?

2015-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I want to be a monkey when I turened into an animal because it is not harm to people and I can sometimes praised of people. <Diary> Mersc Mersc is kind of virus.One people go Korea when he/or she comes Mersc.So,our country are emergency.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for making your homework today. :) So you would want to be a monkey if you were an animal. That\'s adorable and cute. :) kikiki..   Diary: (MERS-CoV) is Middle East respiratory syndrome coronavirus previously known as novel coronavirus (nCoV), is a viral respiratory illness, which was first reported in Saudi Arabia, in 2012. The source of the virus is currently unknown, though it is likely to have originated from an animal. MERS-CoV is dissimilar to other coronaviruses; there is currently no vaccine.   I think this is really alarming and fatal. So, [이름],always cover your nose when you go out and avoid close contact with sick people around you. Always take good care of your health and be aware of what you are eating. Be health conscious.   Thank you [이름]. I will see you next week. Take care always. :) Bye bye :) :) ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I want to be a monkey when I turened into an animal because it is not harm to people and I can sometimes praised of people. >> I would want to be a monkey when I turned into an animal because monkeys do not harm people and they are being adored by people as well. <Diary>MerscMersc is kind of virus. >> MERS CoV is a kind of virus.One people go Korea when he/or she comes Mersc. >> One person entered Korea and he is affected by MERS CoV.So,our country are emergency. >> So, our country is getting alarmed because of that.  

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