If you were to choose a church where you would be designated, where could it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanted to stay at that church until God lets me move to another church. Because only God knew my best way. Before I worked at this church, God said to me very strongly in my prayer time. And God described that suffering I will be and have a hard time. I was afraid but I trusted God already knew what happen to me and will help me. When I had a hard time in that church, I tried to think and focus on God\'s word for me. I believe that when I stay at any church where God wants me to stay, I can grow with church together in a healthy way. I just want to be a person who can find happy things in my life and in God. Even though I will not be a pastor in the future, I want to be a person who can do everything through God\'s grace and a good influencer. I don\'t want to make limit my career. God\'s picture is bigger than my picture. I would like to see his picture for me. I have to do my best in my life to distinguish God\'s plan to me. I can find God\'s thoughts through Bible, prayer time, etc.
강사 첨삭
I always admire your faith, Jane! What I also know is that when we choose God\'s side, we are always victorious despite the obstacles that may come our way. Take care!-Faith-
I wanted to stay at that church until God lets me move to another church. >> I wanted to stay at that church until God let me move to another one.
Because only God knew my best way.
>> It\'s because only God knew my best way.
Before I worked at this church, God said to me very strongly in my prayer time.
>> Before I worked at this church, God said something very strongly in my prayer time.
And God described that suffering I will be and have a hard time.
>> And God described that suffering I would be in and have a hard time.
I was afraid but I trusted God already knew what happen to me and will help me.
>> I was afraid but I trusted God because He already knew what would happen to me and would help me.
When I had a hard time in that church, I tried to think and focus on God\'s word for me.
>> When I had a hard time in that church, I tried to think and focus on God\'s Word for me.
I believe that when I stay at any church where God wants me to stay, I can grow with church together in a healthy way.
>> I believe that when I stay at any church where God wants me to stay, I can grow with them together in a healthy way.
I just want to be a person who can find happy things in my life and in God.
>> CORRECT
Even though I will not be a pastor in the future, I want to be a person who can do everything through God\'s grace and a good influencer.
>> CORRECT
I don\'t want to make limit my career.
>> I don\'t want to make limits for my career.
God\'s picture is bigger than my picture.
>> CORRECT
OR God\'s picture is bigger than mine.
I would like to see his picture for me.
>> CORRECT
OR I want to see his visions for me.
I have to do my best in my life to distinguish God\'s plan to me.
>> I have to do my best in my life to distinguish God\'s plan for me.
I can find God\'s thoughts through Bible, prayer time, etc.
>> I can find God\'s thoughts through the Bible, prayer time, etc.
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