If you were to give a piece of advice to the younger you, what piece of advice will you give yoursel
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Wow, it\'s an interesting question. If I can do it, I want to say an advice that you should find something like what do you want to? and what do you want to be when you grow up? When I was younger, I didn\'t know what I was doing. So I want to say that to the younger me. :)
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Hello there Elic! I am very impressed with your sentence construction in this homework. You\'ve created good sentences, and you were able to convey the message that you want the reader to understand. Good job! You\'re making a lot of wonderful progress in your English-learning journey. I\'m so proud of you! :)
>> Correct. OR Wow, this is an interesting question.
If I can do it, I want to say an advice that you should find something like what do you want to? and what do you want to be when you grow up?
>> If I would be given the chance to do it, I\'ll advise myself to find something that you want to do, something you want to be when you grow up.
When I was younger, I didn\'t know what I was doing.
>> Correct.
So I want to say that to the younger me.
>> Correct. OR So I want to tell those things to the younger me.
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