If you were to recommend an amusement park, which one would you recommend and why?
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i recommend the lotte world.
>> I recommend Lotte World.
there are two famous amusementparks in korea.
>> There are two famous amusement parks in Korea.
one is the lotte world and the other is everland.
>> One is Lotte World and the other one is Everland.
everland is bigger than lotte world.
>> Everland is bigger then Lotte World.
but if you were there at summer or winter, it is terrible.
>> correct!
because distance between rides is so far.
>> The distance between the rides is so far.
lotte world has indoor and outdoor.
>> Lotte World has an indoor and outdoor area.
so you can stay indoor when you go there at summer or winter.
>> You may stay indoors when you go there during summer or winter.
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