If you were to recommend an amusement park, which one would you recommend and why?

2018-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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i recommend the lotte world. there are two famous amusementparks in korea. one is the lotte world and the other is everland. everland is bigger than lotte world. but if you were there at summer or winter, it is terrible. because distance between rides is so far. lotte world has indoor and outdoor. so you can stay indoor when you go there at summer or winter.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you! ~T. Elisha

i recommend the lotte world.

>> I recommend Lotte World.
 there are two famous amusementparks in korea.

>> There are two famous amusement parks in Korea.
 one is the lotte world and the other is everland.

>> One is Lotte World and the other one is Everland.
 everland is bigger than lotte world.

>> Everland is bigger then Lotte World.
 but if you were there at summer or winter, it is terrible.

>> correct!
 because distance between rides is so far.

>> The distance between the rides is so far.
 lotte world has indoor and outdoor.

>> Lotte World has an indoor and outdoor area.

so you can stay indoor when you go there at summer or winter.

>> You may stay indoors when you go there during summer or winter.  

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