If you were to recommend an amusement park, which one would you recommend and why?
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Good day, [이름]! Thank you for sending your homework. I hope that someday, I can visit the Universal Studio! See you in class!
-T. James
I would recommend Universial Studio in Singapore.
>>> I would recommend Universal Studio in Singapore.
I was impressed playing there.
>>> CORRECT
There are many thema from famous movies such as Surek, Jurassic park.
>>>There are many themes from famous movies such as Shrek, Jurassic Park.
Also, it is available to ride some amusement rides. It makes peple relieve stress and feel excited.
>>> Also, it is available to ride some amusement rides. It makes people relieve stress and feel excited.
Therefore, i stroungly recommend to go to Universial Studio especially in Singapore.
>>>Therefore, I strongly recommend to go to Universal Studio especially in Singapore.
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