If you were to remove one social media app from your phone, which would it be and why?
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If I were to remove one social media app from my phone, I would remove Facebook.
I spend the most time on Facebook when I use my cell phone.
If I remove Facebook, I think I can use my cell phone less and spend that time more meaningfully.
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If I were to remove one social media app from my phone, I would remove Facebook.
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OR>> If I were to remove one social media app from my phone, it would be Facebook.
I spend the most time on Facebook when I use my cell phone.
>> I spend the most time on Facebook when I use my cellphone.
If I remove Facebook, I think I can use my cell phone less and spend that time more meaningfully.
>> If I remove Facebook, I think I can use my cellphone less and spend that time more meaningfully.
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