If you will be someone else in a day who will it be and why?

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First I want to be an astronaut. Because they can watch beautiful earth, land, cloud, sunset, sun, moon, stars and so on. besides they can feel zero gravity and it can be proud of others.
>> First, I want to be an astronaut because they can see the outer space and the earth, sun, moon, stars and so on. And besides, they can experience the zero gravity and it will be a big achievement for me.
 Second I want to be a EPL soccer player and national soccer player. Sports always make me exciting, happy, and win or lose, I can feel a sense of accomplishment when end of the game.

>> Second, I want to be an EPL soccer player and a national soccer player. Sports always makes me feel excited and help so that I can feel the sense of accomplishment when the game is over.