If you will be the most influential person in your country how will you invite foreigners to visit K

Hi, Yeong^^

Please study how to use a full stop, comma and subject verb agreement.

Please check your corrections below^^

I will make a lot of international center anyone who want to work place, house, park, culture space and performance area. this work place will build in Seoul, Incheon and Busan. in addition to they receive 70% discount debit card until 3years. Furthermore they can attend traditional and modern celebrate with guides. Such as music, food, performance, travel spot and so on.

>> If I will be the most influential person in this world, I will build a lot of establishments such as International centers, malls and etc. Everyone is welcome to work and to receive a good deal for their benefits. In addition to that they can receive a 70% discount debit card until 3years. Furthermore they can attend a traditional and modern events.