If you will be the most powerful man/woman in the world, what changes will you do? Why do you want t
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I would like to changes many of things haha.
>>> I would like to changes many things haha.
>>> I would like to make a lot of changes.
First of all, I would like to change who has so bad crime.
>>> First of all, I would like to remove those committed a crime.
Most of people want to a peaceful world.
>>> This is because most people want a peaceful world.
Of course I want to too so if I\'m a king of the world, I will solve the problems first.
>>> Of course if I were the king of the world, I will solve this problem first.
And then I would like to change environmental pollution.
>>> After that, I would focus on solving environmental pollution.
Nowadays we\'ve got serious air pollution in Spring in my country.
>>> Nowadays, there is a serious air pollution in my country especially during the Spring season.
I am so sad because we couldn\'t go outside without a mask especially children and elderly people.
>>> I feel so sad because we couldn\'t easily go out without wearing a mask, especially young children and the elderly.
It\'s getting increase who die for the problem.
>>> The number of people who are dying because of this is increasing.
Lastly, I would like to fix all cancers for my ability of the power.
>>> Lastly, I would like to cure all types of cancer if I have the power to do so.
It\'s so badly sad to lost a member of family.
>>> It\'s really so sad to loose a member of the family to this disease.
It\'s kind of grief.
>>> People grieve so much because of that.
So I need the power who could cure the cancer.
>>> So I wish for the power to cure cancer.
It might be not happen to get the power but it is so exciting to thinking of that situation.
>>> In reality, it might be impossible to have that kind of power but it also exciting to think of having that special kind of power.
Hopfully, I would like to get the power in the near future through the scientific technique.
>>> Hopefully, I could get those powers in the near future through scientific means.
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