If you will get a chance to be a leader of your country, what will you do?
학생이 쓴 원문
If God give me a chance to lead the country or province leader,
I will explain my principle to lead my country and claim that i will do it necessarily.
And i will over a country peacefully without any conflict each other.
Above all, I will do my best for environment improvement of all the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
Thank you for submitting your homework!
I really appreciate your answer as it shows how good you will be a leader if you\'ll be given a chance. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> If God will give me a chance to lead the country or be a province leader,
I will explain my principle to lead my country and claim that I will do it necessarily.
I will explain my principle to lead my country and claim that I will do it necessarily.
>> CORRECT.
And i will over a country peacefully without any conflict each other.
>> And I will take over a country peacefully without any conflict with each other.
Above all, I will do my best for environment improvement of all the world.
Above all, I will do my best for environment improvement of all the world.
>> Above all, I will do my best for the improvement of the environment all around the world.
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