If you will have a pet that is not a dog or a cat, what would it be and why?

2019-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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If I have a pet except a dog or a cat, I would like to raise a ferret. Actually, my brother loves animals. Because of him, our family could raise a variety of animals such as a chinchilla, turtles, hedgehogs, iguanas, lizards and so on. Then, we also raised a ferret. I loved him because he was so cute. When I woke up, he welcomed me in my bed. He was just like a puppy, but he did not bark. Although my parents did not like its smell, but I was not sensitive to smell. Also, he did not afraid of people, but he always loved people. I was able to release my stress by playing with him. This is why I want to have a ferret as my pet.

강사 첨삭

Aww this is so cute! Your house must be like a cute little zoo haha.
Thank you for sharing this, Chloe! ^^

- Teacher Debbie

If I have a pet except a dog or a cat, I would like to raise a ferret.
>> correct
Actually, my brother loves animals.
>> correct
Because of him, our family could raise a variety of animals such as a chinchilla, turtles, hedgehogs, iguanas, lizards and so on.
>> correct
Then, we also raised a ferret.
>> correct
I loved him because he was so cute.
>> correct
When I woke up, he welcomed me in my bed.
>> He would welcome me in my bed whenever I wake up.
He was just like a puppy, but he did not bark.
>> He was just like a puppy, but he doesn\'t bark.
Although my parents did not like its smell, but I was not sensitive to smell.
>> I did not mind its smell but my parents were a bit sensitive about it.
Also, he did not afraid of people, but he always loved people.
>> Also, he is friendly to other people.
I was able to release my stress by playing with him.
>> correct
This is why I want to have a ferret as my pet.
>> correct

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