If you will have a wish that will come true, which would it be and why?

I would like to invest my money for property such as apartment and land in case investment is not risky, i mean it is deserve to invest a lot of money when i sell them in the future. Actually i've had many ideas what i want to do if it will make my wish come true. keep thinking in a differnet way, after that dreams happen to me, and then what will remain in my life? I want to see the prospect more further away so that my dreams will 2 or 3 times more worth keeping it. Buying a property is not a piece of cake that we can cope with easily, sometimes we will be at risk causing bankrupcy, not having the insight for what is valuable thing to buy, what potential it has. Hopefully, it is one of my real plan to invest money on those things that i can be more richer than ever and whenever i've heard some stories that some people get their money back from their tenant, i reckon that kind of person is real successful and intelligent people that how they can live their life more wisely.

Good day [이름]! You do have great dreams! Real estate is a good investment. You are right, you can sell it in the future or make it into an apartment that you can make into a business. That is also one of my dreams. ^^ I hope that you will be able to reach your goals. I will always be here to cheer you up and support you. You did a good job with your essay. However, you have to be careful with the tenses of your verbs and your word order. There are times that you interchange some words and it changes the meaning of your sentence. Don\'t worry, we are going to work on it. Please go over the corrections below.If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. See you. Teacher Nina   I would like to invest my money for property such as apartment and land in case investment is not risky, i mean it is deserve to invest a lot of money when i sell them in the future. >> Did you mean: I would like to invest my money for property such as apartment and land in case investment is not risky, I mean it is deserving to invest a lot of money wherein I sell them in the future. Actually i\'ve had many ideas what i want to do if it will make my wish come true. >> Actually, I\'ve had many ideas on what I want to do if my wish will come true.  keep thinking in a differnet way, after that dreams happen to me, and then what will remain in my life? >> Did you mean: What will happen if I think about things in a different way and dreams happen? ( Check your word order. ^^) I want to see the prospect more further away so that my dreams will 2 or 3 times more worth keeping it. >> Did you mean: I want to see the possibilities of my dreams and if it worth keeping. Buying a property is not a piece of cake that we can cope with easily, sometimes we will be at risk causing bankrupcy, not having the insight for what is valuable thing to buy, what potential it has. >> correct Hopefully, it is one of my real plan to invest money on those things that i can be more richer than ever and whenever i\'ve heard some stories that some people get their money back from their tenant, i reckon that kind of person is real successful and intelligent people that how they can live their life more wisely. >> Hopefully, it is one of my real plan to invest money on those things that I can be richer than ever. Whenever I hear some stories that some people get their money back from their tenant, I reckon that kind of person is really successful and intelligent people and ask how they can live their life more wisely. ( Be careful with your verb tenses ^^)