If you will have powers, what powers do you want to acquire?
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This is thought-provoking, Sir [이름]!
I guess if we want to make a change, we should start it with ourselves. We can help people in our own simple ways. Great thoughts!
Ciao!
~Teacher Eunice
When animals die, they leave their skin and when humans die, we leave our name.
>>> Correct!
If I have powers, I would like to be a politician.
>>> Correct!
I have been reading a book about country\'s justice and have been thinking a lot for finding out the answer.
>>> Correct!
If I could be a president or high level of officer in government, it seems like I could change a lot and can make our people happy.
>>> If I could be a president or a high level officer in the government, it seems like I could change a lot and can make our people happy.
I think that the country must respect their people, provide full freedom, should not discriminate people regardless sex, power, wealth and impose the tax and the distribute the money according to the financial status of each family.
>>> I think that the country must respect their people, provide full freedom, should not discriminate people regardless of sex, power, wealth and impose the tax, and the distribution of money according to the financial status of each family.
I think I can make our country wealthy and make people happy.
>>> I think I can make our country wealthy, and make people happy.
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