If you will have your own business, what will it be?
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Dear [Name],
I don\'t want to do my own business. because my own business is very difficult work.
As you know, I do sales, managing money, stock control and so on. if I have a lot of money, I can use emplyee. but I have a little money.
So I must do all things, so I don\'t want to do it.
15 years ago, I tried to move another company from USA company. My boss pursuaded me to give some business. but I rejected his suggestion at that time. the business which he should have given to me was 5 thousand million won as business size.
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Hi [이름]!
As you know, I do sales, managing money, stock control and so on. if I have a lot of money, I can use emplyee. but I have a little money.
So I must do all things, so I don\'t want to do it.
15 years ago, I tried to move another company from USA company. My boss pursuaded me to give some business. but I rejected his suggestion at that time. the business which he should have given to me was 5 thousand million won as business size.
Have an awesome Christmas with your family!
T. DON
Dear [Name],
I don\'t want to do my own business. because my own business is very difficult work.
I don\'t want to do my own business. because my own business is very difficult work.
>> I don\'t want to have my own business because having your own business is a very difficult work.
As you know, I do sales, managing money, stock control and so on. if I have a lot of money, I can use emplyee. but I have a little money.
>> As you know, I do sales, managing money, stock control and so on. If I have a lot of money, I can hire employees but I will have a little profit.
So I must do all things, so I don\'t want to do it.
>> So I must do everything if I have a business so I don\'t want to have one.
15 years ago, I tried to move another company from USA company. My boss pursuaded me to give some business. but I rejected his suggestion at that time. the business which he should have given to me was 5 thousand million won as business size.
>> 15 years ago, I tried to move to another company from a USA company. My boss persuaded me to give think of a business but I rejected his suggestion. The business which he should have given to me was 5 thousand million won as a starting capital.
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