If you will have your own robot, what kind would it be and what skills do you want it to have?
학생이 쓴 원문
I easily get sweat when I work out, walk under the burning sun, and consume spicy food. So I want to have my own robot that features air conditioner so that it can help me cool down everytime my sweat bursts. I am so embarrased whenever I have a meal with someone and get drenched with sweat, using plenty of tissues.
강사 첨삭
I have the same problem as you! That is why I never leave home without a tissue or towel in my bag ㅋㅋㅋ
Thank you for this essay, David! ^^
- Teacher Debbie
I easily get sweat when I work out, walk under the burning sun, and consume spicy food.
>> I easily get sweaty whenever I work out, walk under the burning sun, and consume spicy food.
So I want to have my own robot that features air conditioner so that it can help me cool down everytime my sweat bursts.
>> So I want to have my own robot that features an air conditioner so that it can help me cool down every time my sweat bursts.
I am so embarrased whenever I have a meal with someone and get drenched with sweat, using plenty of tissues.
>> I get so embarrassed whenever I eat a meal with someone and get drenched with sweat, using plenty of tissues.
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