If you will invest your money in something, what would it be and why?
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If I can do it, I should invest in Samsung and Tesla corporation. I feel like there\'s no one in South Korea who doesn\'t have shares in Samsung electronics. And Tesla\'s shares are ri[이름]g, It\'s because there is electronic car in Tesla corporation.
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Hi Elic!
That would be a great investment. They are continuously growing companies and they will be more successful as time goes by.
If I can do it, I should invest in Samsung and Tesla corporation.
>> If I can do it, I will invest on companies such as Samsung and Tesla.
I feel like there\'s no one in South Korea who doesn\'t have shares in Samsung electronics.
>> CORRECT
And Tesla\'s shares are ri[이름]g, It\'s because there is electronic car in Tesla corporation
>>And Tesla\'s shares are ri[이름]g. It\'s because there produce electronic cars there.
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