If you win the lottery for $100M, what is the first thing you would do?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i win the lottery for 100 million dollars, I will buy one of the islands at south pacific ocean at first.
And then I will build and manage a luxury resort because if I manage a resort, I can make more wealth.
And I will employ professional resort manager and I will go on a trip around the world.
(P.S In fact, I won the third prize the lottery last year.)
강사 첨삭
Good evening sir! Thank you for sharing your thoughts for this topic. We were around for the class today so I assume your computer is still not working well. I hope it will be okay tomorrow. And oh my gosh sir! You won the prize lottery? You are so lucky! Wow!^_^
T. Irene
If i win the lottery for 100 million dollars, I will buy one of the islands at south pacific ocean at first.
>>> If I win the lottery for 100 million dollars, I will first buy one of the islands IN the south pacific ocean.
And then I will build and manage a luxury resort because if I manage a resort, I can make more wealth.
And then I will build and manage a luxury resort because if I manage a resort, I can make more wealth.
>>> Correct.
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>>> And then I will build and manage a luxury resort because if I do that, I can earn more wealth.
And I will employ professional resort manager and I will go on a trip around the world.
And I will employ professional resort manager and I will go on a trip around the world.
>>> And I will employ a professional resort manager so I can travel around the world.
(P.S In fact, I won the third prize the lottery last year.)
(P.S In fact, I won the third prize the lottery last year.)
>>> (P.S In fact, I won the third prize IN the lottery last year.)
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