\"If you wishes to falling stars, the wishes comes true!\"
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A lot of people like me can\'t see a falling stars, because our country is a city, so mabye that\'s why they making a rumor. Like, \"If you wishes to falling stars, the wishes comes true!\". To this extent, meteorites and shooting stars do not come to Korea often, so if a meteorite of shooting star comes to one area, this is surprising enough to explode in the news. I keep waiting for meteorites and shooting stars to come~^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
I am sure that someday, if you keep your eyes wide open at night and you will be in a different place, the chances of catching a fallings star is big.
That time, I hope that all of your wishes and desire will all come true. Of course you have to work hard to achieve them.
See you then.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: maybe (SPELLING)
Like, \"If you wishes to falling stars, the wishes comes true!\".
>> Like, \"If you wish to a falling star, the wish comes true!\".
To this extent, meteorites and shooting stars do not come to Korea often, so if a meteorite of shooting star comes to one area, this is surprising enough to explode in the news.
>> To this extent, meteorites and shooting stars do not come to Korea often, so if a meteorite or a shooting star comes to one area, this is surprising enough to explode in the news.
I keep waiting for meteorites and shooting stars to come~^^
>> I will keep waiting for meteorites and shooting stars to come.
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