If you won 2 million dollars in the lottery, what would you do with it?

2019-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

It\'s almost impossible to win a lottery even though I buy it a lot. If I won 2 million dollars in the lottery, I will purchase a luxury car first and then will look for a apartment near the beach. I might give some money to my parents and treat nice meal to my close friends. As you know, the house price in Korea is extremely expensive, so I can\'t afford to purchase the house in the middle of capital city, even though I won a lottery. I also should work because the cost of living in Korea is expensive. I have a possibility to educate my children and to take care of them. If I quit my job, my children can\'t get proper education. Anyway, I would be pleased to think about wining a lottery. I rarely buy lottery, so I don\'t have chance to win a lottery.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]. Thank you for this. I guess hard work is better than taking a chance at the lottery.

However, it\'s not also bad to hope you win a huge amount someday. ^^ Have a great day. See you next class! ^_^

~T.Avery

It\'s almost impossible to win a lottery even though I buy it a lot.

>> It\'s almost impossible to win the lottery even though I buy tickets a lot.

If I won 2 million dollars in the lottery, I will purchase a luxury car first and then will look for a apartment near the beach.

>> If I won 2 million dollars in the lottery, I will purchase a luxury car first and then I will look for an apartment near the beach.

I might give some money to my parents and treat nice meal to my close friends.

>> I might give some money to my parents and treat my close friends to a nice meal.
As you know, the house price in Korea is extremely expensive, so I can\'t afford to purchase the house in the middle of capital city, even though I won a lottery.

>> CORRECT

I also should work because the cost of living in Korea is expensive.

>> CORRECT

I have a possibility to educate my children and to take care of them.

>> I have the means to educate my children and to take care of them.

If I quit my job, my children can\'t get proper education.

>> CORRECT

Anyway, I would be pleased to think about wining a lottery.

>> CORRECT

I rarely buy lottery, so I don\'t have chance to win a lottery.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I rarely buy lottery tickets, so I don\'t have a strong chance to win.

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