If you won a million dollars what things would you change about your life?
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I want to buy a beautiful and expensive house after I won a million dollars.
But I will not live in there because I live alone so I dont need a beautiful and expensive house, and I don\'t have time to clean up that house. I just want to live in my home that is now my home and I might lend my house to someone by taking some money.
It may be such a investment technique. I should consider that because 1 million dollars are big amount of money but not SO big for me to do everything what I want to do.
If I don\'t buy a house, I want nothing. I don\'t know until then because my financial goal is my own house.
강사 첨삭
Hello Gem!
It\'s so nice to daydream about our dream houses right? My dreams are similar to yours. Let\'s play lotto and win a lot of money haha. See you next week!
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
But I will not live in there because I live alone so I don\'t need a beautiful and expensive house, and I don\'t have time to clean up that house.
But I will not live in there because I live alone so I don\'t need a beautiful and expensive house, and I don\'t have time to clean up that house.
>>CORRECT!
I just want to live in my home that is now my home and I might lend my house to someone by taking some money.
>>I just want to live in my current home so I might just put my house up for lease.
It may be such a investment technique.
It may be such a investment technique.
>>It may be such a good investment technique.
I should consider that because 1 million dollars are big amount of money but not SO big for me to do everything what I want to do.
>>I should consider that because 1 million dollars is a big amount of money but not big enough for me to do everything I want to do.
If I don\'t buy a house, I want nothing.
If I don\'t buy a house, I want nothing.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t know until then because my financial goal is my own house.
>>I won\'t know until then because my financial goal is to have my own house.
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